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Having great weakness for poetry among other weaknesses, I find a jouïssif pleasure in front of your delicious poetry. She is soft, tender in detail, simple in her words, simple in her words, simple in her rhymes and fresh in her sensuality.
rIEN 0 CRITICATE THAT THE GOOD HAPPENESS OF HAVING READ ! ! ! Thank you for this pleasure
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Having great weakness for poetry among other weaknesses, I find a jouïssif pleasure in front of your delicious poetry. She is soft, tender in detail, simple in her words, simple in her words, simple in her rhymes and fresh in her sensuality.
rIEN 0 CRITICATE THAT THE GOOD HAPPENESS OF HAVING READ ! ! ! Thank you for this pleasure
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Having great weakness for poetry among other weaknesses, I find a jouïssif pleasure in front of your delicious poetry. She is soft, tender in detail, simple in her words, simple in her words, simple in her rhymes and fresh in her sensuality.
rIEN 0 CRITICATE THAT THE GOOD HAPPENESS OF HAVING READ ! ! ! Thank you for this pleasure
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I had been reading "pseudo-poems
" (hem hem hem, no coment) since all along and I
finally see a glimmer of hope when I read these
verses... only reproach: damage kyé no line
break, the reading is
embarrassed... lol...go on making us
dream
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c super nice bravoooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Congrats very beautiful!
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Congrats ! Very beautiful...
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I present you a poem for the 2nd
time and your comments are always
appreciated...
The title is the past of your childhood
In a dark sky of burning
coal A load of stars in the sky
The roundness of the moon illuminating
The whiteness of your body on the bed resting
Alangui white flower on the wave drifting
In a river of sleep slipping
In the bottomless abyss ,the void
Your heart screaming at me, all its blood spouting
The words you whisper to me tenderly
That arrives gently, slowly but so
ardently
Evil has strength to hear this painful
suffering
that has lasted since your constraining childhood
In this dark sky of burning coal
I see all your past breaking out that
reminds me of time,
Where you my eternal love, my lover
drowned, in the flames flowing
From the fervor of my eyes piercing
fine I do not know if you have loved...
xxx Audrey
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